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| Mokuze-san 2008-11-22 ch 5, | This is one of the few yuri stories on this website that is good (in terms of public decency and tastefulness -_-") great job! I feel like I know the characters from your descriptions! You should make a sequel, idk what really, but all the same, it would be interesting. -Mokuze PS: I forgot to review when reading this earlier, gomen ^^ |
| Markesellus 2008-09-14 ch 5, | Three words: You are amazing! This is such a great piece of writing. I really love it. It only took me about three hours to read straight. It was so addictive. I look forward to anymore writing by you. Once again, awesome story. |
| Fuhrerion 2008-07-26 ch 5, | A truly heart warming story. Thank you so much for such a pleasant reading :) . |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-07-14 ch 5, | omg oh i mean WOW - this was truly fabulous amazing heart wrintching and very cleverly put together - very unique, i like that... absolutely awesome and i just realized something the moment i read it. because Shira is a half priestess, that would mean that when she lost her virginity she would lose her peistess powers that were the only thing that stopped her fathers demon powers from being to ... demonic? :P lol - awesome i love the contrast and lore, amazing really youre awesome ciao Samantha XX |
| Trisagian 2007-01-21 ch 5, | That was absolutely fantastic! Although if there's one criticism I'd make, it's that there seems to be not enough minor characters. I dunno, maybe it's just me. |
| SayurixMion 2006-11-25 ch 1, | God I loved this story!! and all the other stories I've seen you writer! And I read this one about .. well months ago, but I never reviewed apparently I'm sorry >__< But I am now ^__^ anyway I loved this story to bits! The characters, plot and all! Your writing style is so amazing!! And your ideas are- mindboggling! wow how did you come up with these stuff? lol and I could picture and feel everything that you wrote, it was awesome >__< You really inspired me to write after I read your KnM fic and this one. I never had the heart to write but after reading them I had the courage and inspiration to do so, so thank you so much~!You got me writing again! And again, this story is... Amazing! and i can't help but say it again because it is >__< ! hope to see you continue writing in the future whether original or fanfics :) |
| Ryoko 2006-07-12 ch 5, | Wow, this is truly a great story! I read the whole story in 4 hours, just finished it at 1:30 AM. Luckily this story isn't as long as your kannazuki no miko one, otherwise I wouldn't have been able to finish it in one night!Really, you ought to write more fictions! I think you are a really good writer. |
| Blahness 2006-07-11 ch 5, | HOLY CRAP! THIS IS THE BEST FIC EVER!! I read the whole thing in one sitting cause I just couldn't turn away! I mean wow...I was up til like 3 in the morning so I could finish it ^_^. Oh and I'd just like to say that you're an amazing writer ^_^ and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work in the future. |
| Geishinni-chan 2006-05-11 ch 2, | KAWAII! i really like how this is playing out. However, using phrases like "sorry, ne" can confuse readers not familiar with such syntax. excellent use of dialog and emotion. Ganbatte yo! |
| Shinsou 2006-04-07 ch 5, | I think I should be extremely grateful for only finding about this fic after you finished it otherwise the (evil, EVIL) cliffhangers would've made me go insane :P This, along with your KnM fic (if you've written others, please tell me? :D), are possibly the best literary works that I've read so far. Your writing style is brilliant, and it drew me in right away. Usually, I don't like first person narrative, but this is one of the very few exceptions because of the sheer smextastic-ness of your writing. The characters, the plot, basically everything was well-planned and presented :D I find that some authors tend to describe the setting too much which tends to bore the reader at times, but that hasn't happened at all in this work! There is a good mix of tear jerking moments along with humorous ones as well. You had me laughing one minute and looking for a tissue the next (seriously). If I had a roommate, I'm sure she would've thought I'd gone insane :D I'm definitely looking forward to more of your writing in the future! This was absatively wonderful! |
| Houndemon 2006-04-01 ch 4, | I've read your Kannazuki no Miko fic, and I thought it was one of the best literary pieces I've ever read. I found myself fevertly wishing that the anime had followed your script insteead. So when I saw the link to your origninal story, I set my the work I was supposed to be doing aside, thinking I'd check out the first chapter then go back to it. An hour later I finished chapter four and went to click to the next chapter, but found to my dismay there was none! Your writing is beautiful, your characters have a depth to them that make them seem real to the reader, as if I was watching their story play before me, instead of reading words on a page. Please, continue to write. |
| Yuki Myco 2006-03-27 ch 4, | Amazing! Simply amazing. This chapter had a lot of events, most of which were surprising. The ending for this chapter has left me filled, and patient. Now that their romantic relationship has been established I wonder what will happen next. Of course I'd always love just pointless fluff, but..."The show must go on." So I'm looking foward to whatever happens next, because I have this chapter to come back to to read about the happy days. Although I'm really worried if this will end as a tragedy. It's not labeled as such, but then again you can only put two genres so...I'm worried. Anyway, love the story, it's of great quality, and I've quickly become a loyal reader. Keep up the good work and update soon please! |
| Yuki Myco 2006-03-26 ch 3, | Oh my gosh this was such a tear jerking chapter...so sad now... Can't really say much, because I'm going straight to reading the next chapter. Keep up the good work... |
| Yuki Myco 2006-03-26 ch 2, | Kyah that's so amazing! Such a romance filled chapter. Nothing outside of romance development happened, which I'm glad for. Thy am a romance freak. Umm yeah...another awesome chapter. Although now I'm wondering if you'll stay consitant with this POV or if you might switch. Don't misinterpret, the POV is unique and great as is. It's just that whole ShizukaKotonoha kiss thing shot my nerves badly. Seeing that through the persepctive of Kotonoha would've been less nervewrecking. But yeah...it's a great choice of POV as it is now. Now off to read the next chapter! Probably won't finish it tonight, but I'll try. Keep up the good work! |
| Yuki Myco 2006-03-26 ch 1, | Yay I just finished reading the first chapter. Now I can honestly say...I LOVE THIS FIC! It's great! Writing from the perspective of a diary entry is unique, and surprisingly good pace. You slow down at just the right parts of the story. Anyway I'm keeping this review short so that I can go back to reading the rest of the chapters. Amazing story! Keep up the good work! |