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| Singing Satellite 2006-03-21 ch 1, | I really like this!! I dunno why.. I just do I like the way its written and the different scenarios. Awesome job! |
| LulaR 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Not loads of imagery...still undecided on whether that makes it a stronger, more realistic piece or whether it makes it too simplistic. The ideas behind the poem were good though, the cyclical beginning/ending made it stronger |