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diffident
2007-09-17
ch 1,
This is a sad example of scholarly elitism, intellectual oppression.

Hold your light
Eleven, lead me through each gentle step by step
By inch by loaded memory
Til one and one are one, eleven
So glow, child glow.

marie
Lucid Nonsense
2006-05-20
ch 1,
Very interesting, I like it.
Aquafied
2006-03-22
ch 1,
the thinker and the scholarclassic battle and clever callings.

nice, nice.
ancient trees
2006-03-21
ch 1,
That was really really good. It flowed nicely, and your descriptions of 'the scholar' were very powerful and contributed a lot. And yes, it was nice to add a little philosphy to my day. Wonderful concept and beautiful impact on the ending lines.
Isis ShadowWolf
2006-03-21
ch 1,
This piece makes me smile. I've expirienced this before... especially since my dad is a math teacher, and since my sister likes math too.

I like how the explination is nice and brief; that was brilliant. The opening stanza had perfect imagery. Excellent once again!
Crossing the Rubicon
2006-03-20
ch 1,
Hey, hey, I really like this although I fear that I have the scholar's mindset too much of the time. ^^;
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