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| gold against the soul 2006-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseI agree, there doesn't have to be an explanation. I am, I confess, perplexed by the last sentance; it seems like a contradiction of the atheistic perspective you appear to have been giving before [I hope I have not horribly misinterpreted you by imposing my own lack of beliefs on the piece!] Not that it's not good - it certainly made me think and it's amazing that you managed to do that in 3 lines. Brilliant stuff, keep posting. |