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EverlastingDream3
2006-03-22
ch 1,
abusethis is sad...i hope this isnt really what's happened, and if it is, don't give up. i understand that life can be so unfair and stressful, but let writing be your outlet, and i hope things get better.
Olivine
2006-03-21
ch 1,
abuseo.o i hope thats not all actually true... sorry, then, if it is. sometimes you can never tell when a writer is actually feeling what their poetry says. but incase you do, try writing more. writing always helps me get everything off of my mind. i write poems, and even continue writing some of my stories. its never happened to me, but i bet that if i tried, i could get a story out of my pain... as oddly cruel as that sounds.

this is a good poem, though. the repition of that one stanza thingy (no clue what to call it. theres a word, i just dont know it. maybe 'stanza' is right??)

anyways, keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-

ps -- when will you update your story?? invisible ink?? soon, i hope...
Ether Boy
2006-03-20
ch 1,
abusethats really sad and beautiful. i've felt close to giving up before now as well.
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