|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| EverlastingDream3 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abusethis is sad...i hope this isnt really what's happened, and if it is, don't give up. i understand that life can be so unfair and stressful, but let writing be your outlet, and i hope things get better. |
| Olivine 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseo.o i hope thats not all actually true... sorry, then, if it is. sometimes you can never tell when a writer is actually feeling what their poetry says. but incase you do, try writing more. writing always helps me get everything off of my mind. i write poems, and even continue writing some of my stories. its never happened to me, but i bet that if i tried, i could get a story out of my pain... as oddly cruel as that sounds. this is a good poem, though. the repition of that one stanza thingy (no clue what to call it. theres a word, i just dont know it. maybe 'stanza' is right??) anyways, keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:- ps -- when will you update your story?? invisible ink?? soon, i hope... |
| Ether Boy 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abusethats really sad and beautiful. i've felt close to giving up before now as well. |