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les petits bateaux
2006-12-20
ch 1,
you make me melt.
wildwolffree17
2006-10-25
ch 1,
"take a sip
of summer when it grows dark."

I particulary like that bit. The images in this piece are extraordinary.
elasticbobaturtle
2006-06-03
ch 1,
So sweet, but cleverly so. I love the way you played with words and images in the first stanza--really drew me in. Nicely done.
chocolatebarcodes
2006-05-11
ch 1,
O-M-G! fave! drowning in all those pretty words. & i loved how it rhymes subtly. (but it only takes one look / to notice there's just / you and me.) *heart breaks* ):
i heart that guy
2006-04-09
ch 1,
ah..i love it. absolutely love it. the imagery in the first stanza made my heart stop for a moment while i read it. beautiful.
lackluster
2006-03-31
ch 1,
this is sweet. that's the first and only thing that went through my mind while reading it. beautiful.
sunday night sky
2006-03-28
ch 1,
omg *dies* il have to add it my faves :D
ronshaberry
2006-03-25
ch 1,
Aw, that was romantic. The first stanza was funky. I liked it. Very pretty and sweet and free-flowing.
ode to a firefly
2006-03-22
ch 1,
Beautiful imagery and a delightful poem...and the message is especially relevant to me. ;)

~Christine~
forsakensmile
2006-03-22
ch 1,
Us romantics deserved a poem like this.
Needa S
2006-03-21
ch 1,
Beautiful, awesome write.
Naibz
2006-03-21
ch 1,
pretty good. keep writing. thanks for the review btw.
Margot Tenenbaum
2006-03-21
ch 1,
I LOVE THIS.lol.tragic, yet romantic at the same time.*claps*just my cup of tea.
boys kiss girls
2006-03-20
ch 1,
This is a sweet poem. I like the first full stanza the best. Great job.

Oh, and happy first day of Spring (a little late, I know).
bright horizon splash
2006-03-20
ch 1,
Oh my gosh, I LOVE it. absolutely amazing, especially the first stanza. Simply lovely, keep writing!
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