|Reviews for realization|
| les petits bateaux 12/20/06 . chapter 1
you make me melt.
| wildwolffree17 10/25/06 . chapter 1
"take a sip
of summer when it grows dark."
I particulary like that bit. The images in this piece are extraordinary.
| elasticbobaturtle 6/3/06 . chapter 1
So sweet, but cleverly so. I love the way you played with words and images in the first stanza-really drew me in. Nicely done.
| rightclick5ave 5/11/06 . chapter 1
O-M-G! fave! drowning in all those pretty words. & i loved how it rhymes subtly. (but it only takes one look / to notice there's just / you and me.) *heart breaks* ):
| i heart that guy 4/9/06 . chapter 1
ah..i love it. absolutely love it. the imagery in the first stanza made my heart stop for a moment while i read it. beautiful.
| lackluster 3/31/06 . chapter 1
this is sweet. that's the first and only thing that went through my mind while reading it. beautiful.
| sunday night sky 3/28/06 . chapter 1
omg *dies* il have to add it my faves :D
| ronshaberry 3/25/06 . chapter 1
Aw, that was romantic. The first stanza was funky. I liked it. Very pretty and sweet and free-flowing.
| ode to a firefly 3/22/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful imagery and a delightful poem...and the message is especially relevant to me. ;)
| forsakensmile 3/22/06 . chapter 1
Us romantics deserved a poem like this.
| Needa S 3/21/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful, awesome write.
| Naibz 3/21/06 . chapter 1
pretty good. keep writing. thanks for the review btw.
| Margot Tenenbaum 3/21/06 . chapter 1
I LOVE .tragic, yet romantic at the same time.*claps*just my cup of tea.
| boys kiss girls 3/20/06 . chapter 1
This is a sweet poem. I like the first full stanza the best. Great job.
Oh, and happy first day of Spring (a little late, I know).
| bright horizon splash 3/20/06 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, I LOVE it. absolutely amazing, especially the first stanza. Simply lovely, keep writing!