you make me melt.

"take a sip

of summer when it grows dark."

I particulary like that bit. The images in this piece are extraordinary.

So sweet, but cleverly so. I love the way you played with words and images in the first stanza-really drew me in. Nicely done.

O-M-G! fave! drowning in all those pretty words. & i loved how it rhymes subtly. (but it only takes one look / to notice there's just / you and me.) *heart breaks* ):

ah..i love it. absolutely love it. the imagery in the first stanza made my heart stop for a moment while i read it. beautiful.

this is sweet. that's the first and only thing that went through my mind while reading it. beautiful.

omg *dies* il have to add it my faves :D

Aw, that was romantic. The first stanza was funky. I liked it. Very pretty and sweet and free-flowing.

Beautiful imagery and a delightful poem...and the message is especially relevant to me. ;)

Christine

Us romantics deserved a poem like this.

Beautiful, awesome write.

pretty good. keep writing. thanks for the review btw.

I LOVE .tragic, yet romantic at the same time.*claps*just my cup of tea.

This is a sweet poem. I like the first full stanza the best. Great job.

Oh, and happy first day of Spring (a little late, I know).

Oh my gosh, I LOVE it. absolutely amazing, especially the first stanza. Simply lovely, keep writing!