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| les petits bateaux 2006-12-20 ch 1,   | you make me melt. |
| wildwolffree17 2006-10-25 ch 1, | "take a sip of summer when it grows dark." I particulary like that bit. The images in this piece are extraordinary. |
| elasticbobaturtle 2006-06-03 ch 1, | So sweet, but cleverly so. I love the way you played with words and images in the first stanza--really drew me in. Nicely done. |
| chocolatebarcodes 2006-05-11 ch 1, | O-M-G! fave! drowning in all those pretty words. & i loved how it rhymes subtly. (but it only takes one look / to notice there's just / you and me.) *heart breaks* ): |
| i heart that guy 2006-04-09 ch 1, | ah..i love it. absolutely love it. the imagery in the first stanza made my heart stop for a moment while i read it. beautiful. |
| lackluster 2006-03-31 ch 1, | this is sweet. that's the first and only thing that went through my mind while reading it. beautiful. |
| sunday night sky 2006-03-28 ch 1, | omg *dies* il have to add it my faves :D |
| ronshaberry 2006-03-25 ch 1, | Aw, that was romantic. The first stanza was funky. I liked it. Very pretty and sweet and free-flowing. |
| ode to a firefly 2006-03-22 ch 1, | Beautiful imagery and a delightful poem...and the message is especially relevant to me. ;) ~Christine~ |
| forsakensmile 2006-03-22 ch 1, | Us romantics deserved a poem like this. |
| Needa S 2006-03-21 ch 1, | Beautiful, awesome write. |
| Naibz 2006-03-21 ch 1, | pretty good. keep writing. thanks for the review btw. |
| Margot Tenenbaum 2006-03-21 ch 1, | I LOVE THIS.lol.tragic, yet romantic at the same time.*claps*just my cup of tea. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-03-20 ch 1, | This is a sweet poem. I like the first full stanza the best. Great job. Oh, and happy first day of Spring (a little late, I know). |
| bright horizon splash 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Oh my gosh, I LOVE it. absolutely amazing, especially the first stanza. Simply lovely, keep writing! |