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| A. J. Krautwurst 2006-10-11 ch 1,   | "Pretty Little Toy Box Girl With Super Amazing Action Tears" that is pretty much one of the coolest lines i've ever read. the doll is a cool perspective to take, although i find the capitalization on every word a bit distracting. a favorite story (officially -- on my list) nevertheless. |
| in a jar pk 2006-04-07 ch 1, | you wrote this one for me...i love it. |
| BlueMittens 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Is this poem one long run-on sentence? If not you may want to work on putting some puncuation. Other than that this poem was very enjoyable to read. |
| degenerate elite rabbit 2006-03-20 ch 1, | this was really neat to read and i liked the style of it. really cool work. cheers-rabbit |