Ohmygosh... That was really amazing! Oh my... It was so precise and... Wow! Just wow! I think this is really amazing. Maybe send it somewhere? A newspaper and get it published? It's amazing!

Yeah, this was dark, but in a good way. Very thoughtful. You've got quite a bit of talent and it shines in stories like this. Great work!

Wow. It's a deep and horrible insight into 'killing rutines'. You're very talented. This peice of work made me sort of sad, but I also beleive that's probably the reason a lot of adults commit suicide. Great job!