I like the ending a lot. Because that's my entire romantic history. Except for Tess. But she doesn't count. I think this would be better if you could organize a rhyme scheme for it. But besides that it's good.

On a totally different note, that thing with the tree and apples is so true. I'm one of the guys that climbs, by the way.

A part of me likes this...

how can you not like it! its so cute! ::glomps poem::

Once again, really good... it's always like that isn't it. Well, I hope you have fun in Taiwan!

Aww, I definitely know that feeling, I'm sure everybody does at one point in their lives, but ti won't last forever. Nice job.

The typicalness of hidden feelings. Now this is just a little hint from a guy's point of view: if you happen to be "the friend" but you wish you were "the girl" you definately have to let us guys know because we are not smart enough to pick it up on our own and notice the hints. Also you never know, we might just feel the same way and are afraid to tell you so yeah. Anyways enough of my lecture, good poem.

Damn this is how every relationship with guys ends. The writing is amazing and yeah I don't really know what to say. Just damn.

heehee, i'm evil! well, i really do like this poem, cuz its awesome ::nods head:: yupyup. well keep on writin chica, cuz ur a great poet!