|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-04-09 ch 1, | thats pretty good! i like it alot. great work! ~SarahJane |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-03-22 ch 1, | This has a wonderful delicateness. "and in this perhaps weather,", is an excellent phrase. This really bursts. Well done. |
| forsakensmile 2006-03-22 ch 1, | This is great! Good nature poems make me happy. |
| elasticbobaturtle 2006-03-20 ch 1, | I loved the nature-y tone of this; the colors of the text and title are really nice and create a nice, soft image. Bluebells! What an interesting topic. |
| rocket baby doll 2006-03-20 ch 1, | mm, i agree with wat, but i only noticed it cus he/she/it mentioned it.. :P gorgeously written, beautiful beautiful work :) |
| wat 2006-03-20 ch 1, | oh. so pretty. but somehow, i don't like the "he/she/it", since that just feels out of place in the misty tone of this poem. my favorite line is the one with "silk-wrapped night". that is an awesome phrase. |