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Reviews For: The Bluebells Ask the Moon

SarahJaneDrkAngl05
2006-04-09
ch 1,
thats pretty good! i like it alot. great work!

~SarahJane
Moondog Dozier
2006-03-22
ch 1,
This has a wonderful delicateness. "and in this perhaps weather,", is an excellent phrase. This really bursts. Well done.
forsakensmile
2006-03-22
ch 1,
This is great! Good nature poems make me happy.
elasticbobaturtle
2006-03-20
ch 1,
I loved the nature-y tone of this; the colors of the text and title are really nice and create a nice, soft image. Bluebells! What an interesting topic.
rocket baby doll
2006-03-20
ch 1,
mm, i agree with wat, but i only noticed it cus he/she/it mentioned it.. :P

gorgeously written, beautiful beautiful work :)
wat
2006-03-20
ch 1,
oh. so pretty. but somehow, i don't like the "he/she/it", since that just feels out of place in the misty tone of this poem. my favorite line is the one with "silk-wrapped night". that is an awesome phrase.
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