Cute story. Hillary and Chase are adorable together. Good job.

Aw, so cute.

Love Mike and Abby.

Ri

First, before i forget i want to say i found this amusing. The story i had just finished reading had charactors named Tom, Eden, and Luke. heh. ANyway, this story is really good :D

ermm...another weird similarity, your character's name is abigail but goes by abby, my character's name is adrianne but goes by addy...do you want me to change the name?

hitchcock does seem to be a theme in your stories doesn't it?

wow. my story is going to have a best friend with red hair and guys on swim team...do you think that's plagiarism since your story was up first?
and also, I don't think they make a 100 yard pool. even an olympic size pool is only 50...I think...BUT I could be wrong.

great work though. and if you're uncomfortable with similar details in my story I will change them.

Okay, this isn't a needlessly destructive review, but this is the third story of yours I've been reading and it's just been bugging me.
Obviously your religion is very important to you, and that's great. I have no problems with that, or your mentions of Christianity in your stories. It's just that sometimes it can become slightly preachy. For me, as someone who is not religious, it makes me feel exceedingly uncomfortable.
I just think that you can be in touch with your religion with alienating the part of your audience who don't have the same beliefs.
All my best,
Brenna

Lovely. Just lovely. I really enjoyed this story :) I don't think there's much more that I can say! Good job!

loved that last sentence.
so true! :)

-toffeecakesxox.

sorry, forgot to log in. anyway i was reading confessions of a former chew toy, and i thought idd read some more. this is really good!

Someday my prince will come is from snow white right?

NO
Kyle died? D:
I guess someone had to have a sad ending though, that's the way the world works.
It's be nice if everyone had a happy ending though, huh?
I love all of your characters though :3 (except John of course)
Poor Abby though. She falls for guys so fast ^^
Plus Mike is freaking adorable! *sqeels*
I just have a thing for cute guys who blush >.<
My favorite part was when he sung for her though even though it was incredibly cheesy (:
So sweet
Fatty

I'm so touched! You wrote a perfect description of me! :D

I love the story so much!

Wow... right in front of her the whole time... Wonderful story you have a great talent! It was horrible that... 3 guys either did something horrible to her or just wanted to be friends. That'd kind of get you down...

you should make a sequal/spinoff about hilary and chase