Aw, bless. I feel really sorry for her. It was a bit of a suprise that he didn't like her. It's a nice twist...have to read more.

Little S

OK, review for this chapter: extremely cheesey but adorable. I suppose you can argue that Shakespeare is a classic so it's not that bad. Lol, it's great.

Although i have to admit i cringed a few time but hey...i have been warned that this is a corny romance.

Little S

wow... it's really over ain't it? so... fuck! that part about the bruise really gave me a bad mental image... damn... BUT YOU DID SO WELL ON THIS!

OK, lots of things going through my head. Firstly i loved the whole idea of high school being the breeding ground of drama, sexual tension and egotism. LOL, I thought that was a cool line.

I'm hoping that she doesn't end up with mike coz i can sens something might happen there but I'm-in-love-with-my-best-friend thing has been done loads.

I think it would be cool if she fell in love with that John guy coz it would be so ironic...but i suppose the bad-boy-who's-actually-really-nice-but-still-bad has been done as well. Lol

Ok, obviously she's in love with Aubrey and that's cool too. It's nice to know there are still Prince Charmings in the world. Lol, I'm a romantic as well and love disney films to distraction. Beauty and the beast is my favourite. Anyhoo, going to read more now.

Little Sparky

lol, I like this beginning. It's quirky and catches the attention. I have made a resolution to review every chapter in this story as i go. I've never done that before. I'll let you know what i think. Like it so far. hehe. Men!

Little Sparky

The final sentence was priceless! Keep it up.

Hi!

I read your summary and I thought,

Wow...that sounds just like me!

I'm 15, never had a first kiss, or went on a date. But guys like me, and i don't like them more than a friend. And i'm waiting for my oh so lovely prince charming. xD

Wow. It's over. That's so sad. I'm going to be pefectly honest with you, though: I'm not too crazy about the ending. Rather, the epilogue. I like the way you wrote it, almost like a newspaper clipping, but frankly, I've never been a fan of the epilogues where the main charaters get married and stuff. I don't know. Often, it fits-like it does with this-but I guess I just prefer to imagine their future on my own, and not have it told to me.

Eh, whatever. I still love this story. It's amazingly cute and fluffy. ) And I'm sad that it's over. I'll be looking out for more of your stuff!

Oh...em..gee!

Your story is incrediabaly good.

I kind of predicted the ending, but I loved it a lot!

OH MY FUCKING GOD! I can't even tell you how much I loved that ending. Mike is amazing. 'And I Love Her' is undoubtedly one of the best love songs ever written, especially since it's by the Beatles. And I love the epilogue. Beautiful work, I must say. I'm so glad you reviewed my story, because I never would have stumbled across this masterpiece. And I mean that. This story is amazing; beautifully written, the lot. If only I could figure out a suitable ending for my story. Oh well. It will come with time. In the mean time, I bid you farewell! (I'm so corny. I sound like some French guy with a moustache and a huge hat with a big feather.)

Tunny

Haha, you're right: this chapter was definately one of the weirder, if not weirdest, ones that I've read on this site. But seeing as how Abby's dreaming, it's perfectly understandable (as well as forgivable, and quite comical).

But, unfortunately, I'm no good at this "delving for the hidden meaning" stuff (ask my English teachers, and they'll heartily agree). I'm a black and white person, if you know what I mean. I'd try to figure it out just to make you happy (hehe), but I know I'd probably get everything horribly, terribly wrong, and just embarrass myself or something.

To tell you the truth, the only thing I even sort of understand is Mike's promising to buy her a copy of Thumbelina (I LOVE that movie, by the way D). But my non-understanding isn't becuase of you; it's because of me.

Well, that's about all I have to say. Until the next review!

i just got into your story *meaning i was looking through the fiction press page saw the title and the summary thought it looked interesting and well here i am* and can i just say I LOVE IT! mike is so sweet if they don't end up together than . . . i don't know . . .

love the story can't wait to read more!

see you next chapter

Mae

OK, I have something to say-Date rap drugs are NOT awesome. And you CANNOT stop ! lol. This chapter was kind of awkward, and definitely pretty wack. Anyways, UPDATE SOON !

i really want to kill john or any guy that does that. even though it wasn't rape. i feel that it still is. i mean with the whole breast and all. I'm sort of the type of person who really hates people who are sexually active especially if they are still young and not in love. i don't want to upset anybody with what i just said but that is what i really feel. My guess is that she with her being a helper, she tends to not solve her problems leaving her feel left out and still afraid of change. The tollbooth might be the reverend but maybe it's her subconcious telling her to change and not stay in her little hole anymore. For mike, i think she really likes him and the buying the copy of Thumbelina must mean that "would Mike be my prince charming?" I feel like i have the same qualities with Abby, i'm very scared of change, i feel left out because of it and i turn to helping others to try making myself more happy. but i'm a shy person unlike abby and i'm really lacking in the romance department. one last thing, i'm every bit as romantic as her but i don't really base much of my lovely daydreams from disney movies. They fall in love way too fast. anyway, i think i told you too much and you may already be bored so bye... please update! thanks!

well, i'm no good with figuring things out like this, plus i like to be able to go "oh... so THAT'S what that meant" later on, so unfortunately i wont be interpreting this little dream sequence, although i will say it is very nicely written.

however, i am very glad you didn't keep me, and all us other readers/cool kids waiting for too long!