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merrymowmow 2007-05-22 . chapter 9
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Quip Clip 2007-03-10 . chapter 9
I really like how Tristan and Bridget handle their pasts so differently... Tristan gets a bunch of boyfriends and Bridget folds inside herself. And I like Lonnie, too. ;)

When do they find each other again? PWEASE write the next chapter soon!
soccerbabe16 2007-03-09 . chapter 9
great story! i hope you update soon because it is awesome.
Shadow1290 2007-03-09 . chapter 9
*eyes and mouth open* You updated!! *jumps around* YOU UPDATED! Thank you, thank you!! MORE SOON though because when are Triston and Bridget going to meet again?! MORE SOON!

~shadow
Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-03-09 . chapter 9
This is a great story in the making!!

so, I will say, MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! haha
AndForAMomentIAmHappy 2007-02-26 . chapter 4
No, No, No! The details you put were brilliant, anything more would have been shaddy. You are a wonderfull writer and I admire you.
Shadow1290 2007-01-05 . chapter 8
this is GREAT please update soon like when do they meet again!? does Bri get a girlfriend? i usually dont read f/f but i like this? when do they meet again?!?!?! and when do people find out about wht happened O maybe u should like... they go on a date (with their partner) and the four bump into each other and the two idk... MORE SOON please i wanna no wht happens!!
Quip Clip 2006-10-24 . chapter 8
Hey... you should uh... write more? Yeah. Lol. Dunno if you remember me but we used to talk a lot a few years ago, and I thought I'd read some of your new stuff.

I like the way you're portraying the children's reactions to the rapes in different ways. They are both realistic and well-developed, and the story definitely flows well. Way to go, you still have your touch. :)

Anyway, you should definitely update this soon, and Almost An Angel, too. I'm waiting! (Still!)
Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 8
I liked this chapter. Nicely done!
Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 7
So she turned into a dyke, eh?
Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 6
Nice one...
Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 5
I liked this chapter, even though I don't like the references to the rape
Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 4
Be careful with the little girl's rape...
Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 3
They meet already...
Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 2
Hm...not to bad, but not the greatest either...Love it
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