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| merrymowmow 2007-05-22 ch 9,  | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| Quip Clip 2007-03-10 ch 9, | abuseI really like how Tristan and Bridget handle their pasts so differently... Tristan gets a bunch of boyfriends and Bridget folds inside herself. And I like Lonnie, too. ;) When do they find each other again? PWEASE write the next chapter soon! |
| soccerbabe16 2007-03-09 ch 9, | abusegreat story! i hope you update soon because it is awesome. |
| Shadow1290 2007-03-09 ch 9, | abuse*eyes and mouth open* You updated!! *jumps around* YOU UPDATED! Thank you, thank you!! MORE SOON though because when are Triston and Bridget going to meet again?! MORE SOON! ~shadow |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-03-09 ch 9, | abuseThis is a great story in the making!! so, I will say, MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! haha |
| AngelBabyWingz85 2007-02-26 ch 4, | abuseNo, No, No! The details you put were brilliant, anything more would have been shaddy. You are a wonderfull writer and I admire you. |
| Shadow1290 2007-01-05 ch 8, | abusethis is GREAT please update soon like when do they meet again!? does Bri get a girlfriend? i usually dont read f/f but i like this? when do they meet again?!?!?! and when do people find out about wht happened O maybe u should like... they go on a date (with their partner) and the four bump into each other and the two idk... MORE SOON please i wanna no wht happens!! |
| Quip Clip 2006-10-24 ch 8, | abuseHey... you should uh... write more? Yeah. Lol. Dunno if you remember me but we used to talk a lot a few years ago, and I thought I'd read some of your new stuff. I like the way you're portraying the children's reactions to the rapes in different ways. They are both realistic and well-developed, and the story definitely flows well. Way to go, you still have your touch. :) Anyway, you should definitely update this soon, and Almost An Angel, too. I'm waiting! (Still!) |
| Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 ch 8, | abuseI liked this chapter. Nicely done! |
| Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 ch 7, | abuseSo she turned into a **, eh? |
| Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 ch 6, | abuseNice one... |
| Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 ch 5, | abuseI liked this chapter, even though I don't like the references to the rape |
| Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 ch 4, | abuseBe careful with the little girl's rape... |
| Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 ch 3, | abuseThey meet already... |
| Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 ch 2, | abuseHm...not to bad, but not the greatest either...Love it |