 merrymowmow 2007-05-22 . chapter 9I was wondering when you're going to update? |
 Quip Clip 2007-03-10 . chapter 9I really like how Tristan and Bridget handle their pasts so differently... Tristan gets a bunch of boyfriends and Bridget folds inside herself. And I like Lonnie, too. ;)
When do they find each other again? PWEASE write the next chapter soon! |
 soccerbabe16 2007-03-09 . chapter 9great story! i hope you update soon because it is awesome. |
 Shadow1290 2007-03-09 . chapter 9*eyes and mouth open* You updated!! *jumps around* YOU UPDATED! Thank you, thank you!! MORE SOON though because when are Triston and Bridget going to meet again?! MORE SOON!
~shadow |
 Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-03-09 . chapter 9This is a great story in the making!!
so, I will say, MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! haha |
 AndForAMomentIAmHappy 2007-02-26 . chapter 4No, No, No! The details you put were brilliant, anything more would have been shaddy. You are a wonderfull writer and I admire you. |
 Shadow1290 2007-01-05 . chapter 8this is GREAT please update soon like when do they meet again!? does Bri get a girlfriend? i usually dont read f/f but i like this? when do they meet again?!?!?! and when do people find out about wht happened O maybe u should like... they go on a date (with their partner) and the four bump into each other and the two idk... MORE SOON please i wanna no wht happens!! |
 Quip Clip 2006-10-24 . chapter 8Hey... you should uh... write more? Yeah. Lol. Dunno if you remember me but we used to talk a lot a few years ago, and I thought I'd read some of your new stuff.
I like the way you're portraying the children's reactions to the rapes in different ways. They are both realistic and well-developed, and the story definitely flows well. Way to go, you still have your touch. :)
Anyway, you should definitely update this soon, and Almost An Angel, too. I'm waiting! (Still!) |
 Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 8I liked this chapter. Nicely done! |
 Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 7So she turned into a dyke, eh? |
 Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 6Nice one... |
 Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 5I liked this chapter, even though I don't like the references to the rape |
 Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 4Be careful with the little girl's rape... |
 Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 3They meet already... |
 Mind Barrier 2006-10-12 . chapter 2Hm...not to bad, but not the greatest either...Love it |