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| Martin the Waterskier 2008-11-06 ch 1,   | Expecting a bit more drama with the whole breaking up with Sam bit. BUT I LIKED IT. A LOT. And even though that was abrupt, everything else was fantastic. The last line was, woah. |
| shepromised-shelied 2007-12-10 ch 1, | Awesome story. I love this oneshot, even tough it should be longer. Keep it up. |
| TrixInTreats 2007-12-04 ch 1, | Nice. It was sad and good. all at once. |
| A Solitary Burch Tree 2007-03-06 ch 1, | Interesting take on the situation. Most focus on the happy ever after, no baggage, let's ignore the fact that Life gave me the shaft until today. You, not so much and I totally dig it. If fact, I love your writing style in general. I read 'Mood Ring' and greatly enjoyed. Made me laugh like you have no idea. And the whole 'Spanish-Gangsta' thing? That is totally, utterly and completely me. I'm about as white as they come and I love spouting slang that would probably get me shot in some neighborhoods. Granted I don't have friends that understand my antics the way her's did but the idea is the same. And I laughed until I cried when I read 'casa perro'. My personal favorite is 'palabra'. Heh, we have some good times in Spanish class. Anywhy, I just wanted to tell you how much I thuroughly enjoyed your writings and keep chilaxin' with the best of them! -A Solitary Burch Tree |
| ironicdeathx 2007-03-06 ch 1, | Amazing story! But if she loved Sam like she said she did, I don't think she would've left him that easily. |
| wandless 2007-01-27 ch 1, | I like this story. It's ... kind of twisted. That's the only word I can use to describe it. I kind of like how you didn't tell us much about the main character. I think the last line is my favourite. I wasn't expecting it. Actually, I didn't really expect anything you wrote. Wow, this is so cool. I'm so happy your story was so uncliche and original. Keep writing! |
| reach4thesky 2006-08-28 ch 1, | I really like this story-- short and sweet.don't you wish life really was like that? (not the abusive boyfriend, but the prom king who's in love with you)good job :) |
| Emily 2006-07-12 ch 1, | I like this. I think you should try and write more for it... |
| ... 2006-06-05 ch 1, | Interesting. |
| procrastinatenow 2006-05-08 ch 1, | That was an impressive story. |
| pinkfairydust 2006-04-07 ch 1, | great chapter! awesome way to start too! love it! |
| rewind regrets 2006-04-05 ch 1, | Great one-shot. The part I liked best though was when she whispered," I'll still keep your bruises." I don't why, but for some reasonI like it. |
| brennadorko 2006-03-21 ch 1, | sounds good luna |
| boys kiss girls 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Wow this is so captivating. I usually dont like long stories this length, but I really liked this one. I especially like the last line "I knew I'd be his hooker." Its sad, but sort of funny at first. Great story. |
| bright horizon splash 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Wow. I'm not really one for reading stories on fictionpress, but I couldn't stop reading! Amazing story. Great job. |