|Reviews for Spirit's Story|
| Caesar H 4/23/06 . chapter 1
Yo, guess who. That's right, it's Hannah. It took me like ten hours to find this, because I can't spell "lily" which is really sad, because...it's four letters. But I seriously went through "lillie," "lilly," and "lilli" before I got to this.
Ok, I liked it. At first I thought it was a little breathy, but I got over it.
Also, I want to say something about the whole animals having souls thing that Anonymous-cat brought up, but then again...I don't really feel like it. Maybe later.
But anyway, cheers!
And you are the first person on my favorites list, so go you.
| Anonymous-cat 3/28/06 . chapter 1
Very, very well done. It's an interesting twist you put on the creation story, defining the Trinity the entire time.
One interesting thing:“So let us change the art of theater to create beings to live in both. And let us give these beings souls; let us give them personalities, unlike the plants that have body only.”
Does this mean you believe that animals have souls? I've got my own opinions, but I'd like to hear yours.
Great piece of writing, though!
| Thanatos1495 3/23/06 . chapter 1
Very good story...I liked it.
| Lightning Princess 3/21/06 . chapter 1
Wonderful! I love this, I really do! Great job! I especially like the last few paragraphs.