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| Sarah-Brighteyes 2006-12-10 ch 1,   | Another lovely piece. You have an original style to your writing. I enjoy it. Not the usual mundane... kill myself, lost in a relationship of woes, life is horrid... pieces. You have meaning in what you write. I love how this reminds me of promises that life is not that horrible. It is like a breakthrough in ones soul. I guess it makes me think of heaven and what is out there if you wait long enough to get there. peaceful... hopeful piece. Love it. Bravo. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-13 ch 1, | Interesting, reveals many emotions. |
| in theory 2006-03-30 ch 1, | This speak so directly to me, I love to wander (note pen name). Metaphysicality is something so fun to play with, the rainbow is lush enough to bend to any poet's will (but you captured her with special ease). Brilliant work. Thanks for your comments :-) |
| strawberry memories 2006-03-28 ch 1, | i love the part about the heart finding wings. isn't that what everyone's goal should be? Learning how to fly? anyway, this is a great poem. keep up the nice work! |
| Seraph Strike 2006-03-27 ch 1, | This is excellent. No words for it, really, favorited. Your work is consistent in its brilliance. |
| beti213 2006-03-21 ch 1, | what beautiful words she said, and what beautiful words you use to describe it! 'just not at home'... I love it! this is sparsely worded and short but extremely clear and full of meaning. well done! |