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| White is a Sin 2006-05-27 ch 1, | Hello there and thanks a bunch for the review. I really like this...it was weird rhyming set out thingy.(that makes sense!) It was really good and the way you wrote it -short (each line) and long (the whole thing)- was really catchy...It's like a song in some way that's weird umm i'm not making sense so i'll go now BYE |
| nightslight 2006-03-20 ch 1, | very nice, i like the writing style. |