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| under the influence 2006-09-20 ch 1,   | Ack...there needs to be more! |
| JennieMR 2006-09-20 ch 1, | Oh my gosh, that is sad! Yes, continue,and give this girl a new love! :-) |
| special 2006-07-05 ch 1, | Oh wow..that was amazing. I really didn't expect that. Very sad. Very well-written. I think you should continue it. It seems like there should be more. Yep. ;)allie |
| J.D Braff 2006-06-27 ch 1, | nods in agreement. this piece does sound kind of like a prologue...one to an awesome and interesting story i might add. its been awhile but if you do decide to expand, would be cool if you gave me a holler. i'll be back to check up on it in any case. =) |
| Mosaic Stains 2006-05-26 ch 1, | This had me very close to tears. At first I was wondering why you had it in present tense, but then I came to notice why at the endding. Honestly I think you should continue this, and trust me I'm not one of those people who think sequels and continuations should be written of every story and short. The way you wrote thios it sounded like a prologue. So if you chose to update, then I'm waiting to read it. |
| Kate 2006-04-12 ch 1, | Well, I certainly didn't see that coming, nice work. I'd like to see it progress further, so I guess I'll just have to wait and see. |
| Burnt Bread 2006-03-26 ch 1, | The ending was quite unexpected and very powerful. I liked it lots. I must also comment on he annoyance that traffic lights cause me - and it's always the same traffic light. I can just see two guys sitting behind computer screens, sipping coke and eating ships, switching the lights to red and laughing cause they have nothing better to do with their lives. The piece was very well written, it could stand alone or it could make an interesting story. |
| LoVeLuKe 2006-03-20 ch 1, | It's so sweet and yet so sad. This is from your ** kicking friend. |