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| JoHnAtHaN 2006-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abusegod u r lyk obsesed wit death u need 2 go 2 a therapist u suck meh left nut |
| myheartwantsyou 2006-04-15 ch 1,  | abusevery good, a new take on the grim reaper. and happy 100th post! |
| firebenderZula 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAnother wounderful poem! |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abusepowerful descriptions.. awesome imagery.. I love it.. congrats on 100 posts |
| HiddenFlame42 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseWow...dark and strangely beautiful at the same time. Great work! :) |
| Drea-le-Fox 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseHey! Let me begin by sayong sorry for not reveiwing any of you other works (school has been a pain) the reveiw- I love the imagery and the general flow of the poem |
| Ben Wuest 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abuseWow... you're too good for me! It's a good thing that you don't write songs often, or people would forget about me entirely in your shadow! Haven't heard from you in a while, but maybe it's because we're back in school again from spring break... so no more late-night weekend chats... *sniffle*. J, I realized something rather horrible today, but it's something I have to tell you nonetheless. When I move back to Nebraska - back with my mom - there won't be weekends when I come to grandma's and stay online all day and night... In short, there's no internet up there. But I'll find a way, whether it means war or negotiation, I'll find a way... damn it! (lol)... (remember)B. |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abuse*cheers* 100 glorious posts ^_^ haha...well...I think you're an amazing writer and seeing that you feel the same felt pretty trippy ((in pammy's world that means cool ^_^)) anyways, this is, of course, awsome-I love how you don't always have to rhyme everything, it just has it's own natural flow. Keep it up!!*hugS*--pammy-x3 |
| method acting 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abusemost DEFINATLY your best. No question...the descriptions are just likewoah and amazing vocabulary. Did you have to write this for english or something? You are totally improving, keep on this. Happy 100th post. |
| Hidden Lies 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseYes it is definantly your best work I think. Awesome. 100 posts yay! *parties* congrats'! |
| Chemically Induced 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abusedark wings come cover the orchid sky is a wonderful line. i totally loved it, my favorite. some nice, sexual imagery going down. right on ;). the italicized endinig chantish thing is a dark, excellent touch. consider yourself +1 fan. love, c.induced. |
| Jess 2006-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! JOSH THATS REALLY GOOD!! I LUV IT! I REALLY REALLY DO!! =( MUST FIND TUNE 2 A SONG 2 FIT IT!! =P luv u!! XoXoXo Jessie - Kate |
| Princess-anna57 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseJOSH! Lovely poem. It's awesome! ^_^ Very, very good! Keep going! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| katie 2006-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseOH IV READ THIS BEFORE! AND OMG! AM I UR FIRST REVIEWER FOR UR HUNDRETH POST! ARGH! LOL WOOT! ok..lol luv ya joshy *hugs* |