supple ryhmes written into a beautiful painting. nice job. *

wow. this is really good. different, but i like the topic.

well, i like it already just because it looks nice. i'm still trying to figure out what it means, though. hehe! XD gimme 10 more minutes, i'm a bit slow.

this is nice. It's very smart, dramatic and really sticks to you. Haunting. Very good, again. )

awesome!

the idea of painting was great. i loved the phrase "intricately stenciled-existence". its beautiful. you write really well, keep on going! (:

oh. this is beautiful. wonderful. magnificant! i love it. i love the 'help me paint the memories.' very well written!

-sunshine