oh wow. why did you stop this, update it soon, please?

aw... his life is so tragic. but i like how this story skipped around.

update soon?

Hey-lo again, Miss Valentine.

I'm SO glad you decided to put a little snippet of Michael and Adam in this chapter. Greatness, I'm telling you.

I'm wondering, eventually, will you explain why Matt is writing this to Celeste?? And, will you write a story about Celeste herself??

Oh, and what about Gabrielle (Michael's and Adam's daughter) and-- oh, wow, I forgot Dave and Fay's son's name... Was it Aiden?? No, I don't think so.

Well, you know what I mean.

So, another brilliant chapter from you, all though I didn't expect anything less :)

I'm looking forward to another chapter, so you should expect me to check back constantly!!

--Raven (I just noticed that the names we go by rhyme!! Wow, I'm a bit slow on the uptake... :D)

aye, ok, i love them both...

sigh

lolx

Wow, this chapter was phenominal. There's not much more to say about it than that.

weet weel, hot stuff!

Dx

Wow, this was a great chapter. Very emotional, it let you feel like you got to understand Matt on a deeper level than ever before.

*Jaw. On. Floor*

Ohmigod! I love this story! I read the Emo Boy series and I loved it but this seems so much more personal than that...

It's awesome! Update soon!

ahh, pure beauty!

This is awesome, I think a lot of people can relate to this. I can already name about five families off the top of my head in Drumchapel who have probably grown up like Matt.

iloveit

aw freaking aw thats...great stuff i swear ha you rule!

aww that's so sad!

aye

gid

x

POOR MATTIE-JAY!

Okay, now that I have THAT out of my system... I'm so excited that you have this story up!!

But... what about Angel?? He said he dumped her?! I'll kill him... *grr*

I so want you to write more... you're one of the very few talents who can actually FINISH a story!! I love Mattie-Jay!!

Luvs--Raven