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| perpetual questions 2007-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseSad and effective. It tells a story in just 17 syllables. Nicely done. |
| strawberry memories 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abusevery realistic. A little desperate. Nice work! |
| Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abuseSweet yet so sad. Very nice. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseThis captures a lot of feeling, and eludes to the open-ended past of a relationship so well. Good haiku. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully told. Juliet. |