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eighteen hundred
2006-03-24
ch 1,
This cool, I'm thinking. The last line works well, timing is good, all that stuff. Nice.
Faye Coon
2006-03-21
ch 1,
Hello! Iam super impressed with your poem, I was just looking through all these boring peoples boring god kowtowing poetry and felt myself experiencing an insufferable nausea...and then I found this type of ode to the swet colored life of a child who's gotten older that that title's worth... This is quite a 'sweet' poem! I'll look into more of you work...if you don't mind? *smile* -Coon
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