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| EnemyWithin 2006-03-21 ch 1,  | abuseYour poems remind of Salvador Dali's paintings, surreal yet meaningful, and full of hidden messages if one looks close enough. I think my favorite line would have to be "So maybe it was the alchemist's soup/That had you sprouting metallic angel wings". Very descriptive language, and it flows very well. Also, I like how you refer to "Doctor" as a name and not a profession. |