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| Holly Rose E 2006-04-07 ch 1,   | artistic liberties are part of my favorite things...i love the phrase "Vomiting silk", what an image.i think Cerberus was the name of the dog, not the type... i could be wrong, but, you might want to look into that.this was great, i loved the style you used. |
| jo-chan55 2006-03-21 ch 1, | I will never understand how you are capable of writing such excellence. Everything you write turns out amazing. loves it. keep on writing hun. *kisses* *cookies* |
| ilovetheopera 2006-03-21 ch 1, | it was good, very good. i liked the disjointed quality that appeared, and also the constant 'breaks' away from the rest of the poem, and the repetition of 'pretty baby'. i dont know about the seven sins thing though. and artistic liberties are what keep us artists alive. we should never avoid taking a few. -wink. |
| EnemyWithin 2006-03-21 ch 1, | Very surrealisic and disturbing, I like it. All though it may be confusing, that isn't necessarily a bad thing. It leaves room for interpretation. The last line sums things up very well, and I like the tone and flow of it. |