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| Jassenah 2006-04-13 ch 1,   | *gapes in awe* it sounds like something I would say, I'm not kidding. Very nice job, I like how you kept it nice and short but still got your point across. Sometimes I feel like my heart is ice tooand people remind me. |
| Just Broken Shards 2006-03-21 ch 1, | Wow. This is awesome! I especially love the last stanza. |
| jenjiyana42 2006-03-21 ch 1, | Really nice, I like the sense of contradiction. Good work, keep it up. |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2006-03-21 ch 1, | This was great. The enetire thing was flowing and I loved the insistance that to understand you must try to understand not shatter the shield, but coax it open. Great job and I loved this message. Sincerely, the Stranger in the moonlight. |