Reviews for Sitting Here, Waiting forever

AbstractMind 2006-06-06 ch 1,	abuseI love the simplicity of it. Plus it was short which made it easier to read. I think that it is a VERY good poem, but that you should work on your punctuation because it really makes a difference. The only grammatical error I found was in the third line...it should say "each one representing".Good job though, truely
marti10 2006-06-04 ch 1,	abuseReally nice poem! I love it. Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I updated my story: Famous. I hope you can read it! It's reaching its end, but there's going to be a sequel, don't worry. Please reply! Thanks.
I Like Pancakes 2006-03-21 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful... Amazing... Astonishing... Please write more poems... I love this poem so very much
Melissa O'Day 2006-03-21 ch 1,	abusethis is so good...omg i love it!
Jodie Sinclair 2006-03-21 ch 1,	abusehehe i'm reviewing yay! its good i like although ive alredy read it