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| Her Wishing Well 2007-10-15 ch 1,  | abuseI think you should continue it, it was really good and different, i loved it. |
| faerie-gumdrops 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseWow this is really really beautiful. And I love how you write from both points of view. I loved how you described her purity as 'like a creamy colour, but no less beautiful and far more striking' wow. I found one typo if you want a nitpickety review, near the end you put 'oyu' instead of you. I think that's it. Anyway, yeah, beautiful, emotional stuff. It'll be really interesting if you do decide to continue this. |