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| Annabell Lee 2006-04-05 ch 1,   | The cold form fits well the cold subject. |
| Revinita 2006-04-02 ch 1, | Amazing. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Simple - but with still enough complexity to make the notion stick in my head - there has to be life burrowing underneath the ground all the time, otherwise we would never see the seasons change. Like that saying that just when one season begins you can already start to notice the next one settling in. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |
| Elements Arise 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Fascinating...I love how it questions the duration of life. |
| L. X. Petrik 2006-03-23 ch 1, | You could almost mistake this for a haiku. Very vivid, I love the desolate feeling in this one. |
| White-Necromancer 2006-03-23 ch 1, | not sure what is it about this but its really captivating. Well written and with a strong message. |
| Complications 2006-03-23 ch 1, | I like this poem, it seems to be saying the opposite of what other people are... or maybe it's just my imagination.I read your other poem spray It's cool too but I think you can add to it, because you haven't put it under haiku. thanks for your review, I apricate it... really I do. |
| classic violet 2006-03-22 ch 1, | ohh, chilling & so vivid. |
| Calenheniel 2006-03-22 ch 1, | This really struck a chord with me...love it! Def. faving it. |
| Aquafied 2006-03-22 ch 1, | flowers often die regardless of snow but it reminds me of this poem that won this contest i was in a while back daisies in the snow. not fair. |
| Johana 2006-03-22 ch 1, | Aw, this is a very sad piece that can be interpreted beyond the simple beauty that is nature. Good job. |
| ChasingPerfection 2006-03-21 ch 1, | Hey there babes...in my opinion this is a very bleak poem. For some reason my brain keeps on saying, "it's very brown" so ya, take that however you wish. again not the traditional haiku but I still like it :) I noted that you considered it "spiritual/tragedy"...I must agree I see the tragedy easily but the spiritual is more of a streach for me...I think I see it though.. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-03-21 ch 1, | Well...this was deep! I love it! ~xoxo~ |
| AgentFade2Black 2006-03-21 ch 1, | Woah...the combination of words so eloquently put together...I'm thouroughly impressed. |
| Smoky Bear 2006-03-21 ch 1, | fabulous depiction of how nothing ever really dies. |