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| AlterEthereal 2007-02-18 ch 25,  | abuseending relationships is hard. but i bet it's even harder to end relationships that never officially existed. i'm gonna call you later and we can plan a hang out session. chill, ** about school, doodle, watch movies, eat pizza, whatever. hope you're doing well right now~ *love* |
| LightfootLee 2007-02-08 ch 25, | abuseMan that was a good story. I still think you should have went into larger detail with the Jetpack Raccoon fight but it still rocks. Congrats Sunshine. |
| AlterEthereal 2007-01-13 ch 20, | abuse"hot dog weeds"? ROFL. they're called cattails, dear. XD and sometimes it's okay to break down in front of people. it's not about showing weakness or desperation, but showing how you feel. it's important! i'm proud of you for how you handled this one. |
| AlterEthereal 2007-01-11 ch 17, | abusewait wait wait. swimming? dude, when was this? 'cause i'm pretty sure today is january 11th and it's only liek 40 degrees outside. :| I'M GOING SHOPPING TODAY. ROAR. |
| SO-iiN-LOVE 2007-01-11 ch 17, | abuseTHAT WA5 A GoOD 5TORY |
| mormonboy 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseI really like this first chapter. I plan on comming back and finishing the restof the story so keep it up. |
| LightfootLee 2006-06-20 ch 13, | abuseWow... You are much better at writing stories than I am. Seriously it was amazing, and I think I understand some of your poems better now. Good job, keep it up Sunshine. |
| AlterEthereal 2006-06-18 ch 13, | abuseyou know, i got an email from the producer of the new "greg behrendt show" the other day, asking if i'd like to "share my story" on national television. (no joke.) i, of course, don't really have any stories to share, but babe, you oughta go to los angeles in my place. |
| onyxdragonflyy 2006-06-17 ch 13, | abuse“Good night. And I'm sorry I never made those mashed potatoes.” lol... I love that line. In fact, I just love the way you write. You create so much life with your characters, moving them through out the story so easily. Such talent. Looking forward to your next story. ^^ |
| onyxdragonflyy 2006-06-02 ch 12, | abuseLe sigh.. *re-reads this* I just love this! It's sort of like a dream... or am I invisioning yours? lol.. I can't wait to read more. Please continue to write! |
| Toxic.Industrial.Waste 2006-05-08 ch 12, | abuseI LOVED IT! *giggles* It's like a teenage girl's dream & nightmare. I feel so sorry for you that you have to suffer this confusion. But, I do rather enjoy this. I'm thinking about starting to write about me and my boyfriends relationship. He was in a car wreck about 3 months into our relationship...we've been together for a year in a month and a week. I can't wait. He's back in the hospital now, but hopefully will be home soon. Well. Hope to see updates. ♥His Fairie Princess |
| AlterEthereal 2006-05-08 ch 12, | abusei'm sure you looked gorgeous for your prom.~ (you were wearing my clothes? XD) your life is a total romance novel, you know that? and it's even crazier when i know the two main characters! he said he loved you? did he did he? ahh! *something* i dunno. i have lots of energy and not much to say with it, i'm sorry. yuuki and i didn't do much dancing at prom, either. and i sucked at the obstacle course while he was great at it. :[ ah, memories, LOL. |
| onyxdragonflyy 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWow.. speechless one this one.. great doesn't even describe it's power.. |
| Papa 2006-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuse"!?," Why do you do that!?, Stop!?, |
| vcs 2006-03-25 ch 5, | abuselove them all, sets a real tone and atmosphere. |