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| Mei-Mei the SciFi Junkie 2006-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseYou are a master of haiku hehehe. Seriously, this is a hard form because it is so simple. I really like your style and the imagery here is lovely. I also like the italics ^_^ |
| a lonely september 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abusethe beach? i dunno, but this was well written. nice detail. |
| Chemically Induced 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseyou can write haiku. mean haiku, seriously. peerless with these things. the fastasy imagery was excellent. swirl around my toes brought to a relatable level, though, and was probably the best line of the poem. along with the first and second. :) love, c.induced. |
| strawberry memories 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseyour haikus are amazing! how do you do that? (i'm so jealous...) i like how you have such a short, yet catching title! |
| Revinita 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseThis one brings such a clear picture to my mind...wow. |
| deathtotal9 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI adore this - I have such an obsession with dragons! The image of water spirits & dragons swirling around your toes is fantastic. It's just perfect the way it is. |
| Kiyoe 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abusethat had a nice image to it. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseNow this one I love - I've always found the idea of water spirits fascinating - like the image of ghosts trapped in water is just a very tasty image for my imagination and I like the added detail about dragons, I can see the reality of you seeing this as you are, as well as the fantastical quality of this taking place in some far off world. Loved it! Juliet. |
| Aquafied 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abusedeep ends of pools and sadness. drinks and drunk.s. i like it |
| ChasingPerfection 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseOkay...I know I said I would never leave a "good job" only review...but I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really like this one just as is! :D Good job! |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Hum...I don't know what else to say right now other than it was well written! ~xoxo~ |