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| degenerate elite rabbit 2006-04-04 ch 1,   | i want this on my page, quoted! haha, cheers-rabbit |
| Revinita 2006-04-02 ch 1, | Hm...I'm not sure I get it... But I'm no master interpreter. Still, beautifully written, as always. |
| deathtotal9 2006-03-27 ch 1, | As simple as this is, it was very appealing. I think I'm actually inspired now to do something similar with the spacing like that. |
| Pink Sparrow 2006-03-24 ch 1, | oh wow. its so short but saying everything. wonderful work. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-03-23 ch 1, | I really like this - it's a solid thought in that it makes since and I actually entered this thought process but still I feel like I've read that notion before - like it's not a new revelation to me, maybe because I am a writer to. The writing was good, but the idea, maybe not so original.Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |
| L. X. Petrik 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Your right, it does require a second-third or sixth read. Lol, I get it. I like this, C'est minngone! |
| classic violet 2006-03-22 ch 1, | like poetry...lovely job. |
| Aquafied 2006-03-22 ch 1, | reminds me of alice in wonderland, wonderfully it does what a wonder we have found ourselves in a dream |
| Loup17 2006-03-22 ch 1, | ooOOoo, i LiKe that po~em. i think the title was perfect for it ^..^ sometimes the world of writing and words is far far better than reality |
| ChasingPerfection 2006-03-21 ch 1, | having fun with spaces today, are we? LOL I like this piece but the title...I dunno, I know what diction is, and I understand the poem, but it just doesn't seem like a very good title for this one. Maybe something more like "Writing" or "Fiction" (though to be honest I'm not a big fan of those titles either) |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-03-21 ch 1, | I like this one! Great Job! ~xoxo~ |
| toxic-noodle725 2006-03-21 ch 1, | although its really short and simple it still had a powerful message. good job. i liked it! |
| in theory 2006-03-21 ch 1, | I love this idea, tackled it differently a long time ago. (would value your opinion, it's called "Scribble" might have to search for it it's old) and yeah, it's something I'm fascinated by, you described it so succintly. Awesome work. |