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Reviews For: Gingerbread

Decollage 2006-04-23 ch 1,	abuseI love the tone. he will consent to anythingalong those lines(of lined hands and palms stickingand the usual). Perfect.
fairEtales 2006-03-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is really amazing and I love the metaphors.
Lovetress 2006-03-24 ch 1,	abuseThis is beautiful work. I loved the line "love is easier to swallow if we're cartoons".
Spare Change 2006-03-24 ch 1,	abuseHm, desire, so inspiring. Very sensual. Good job. :)
Calligrapher of Hearts 2006-03-23 ch 1,	abuseSweet, fragile, and messy. Love or a gingerbread man? Or both? Very good comparison! Brilliant! xhXix
Aquafied 2006-03-22 ch 1,	abuselife would be easier if we were cartoons dont you think? (cute and harsh. rough but smooth. i like it)
Faithless Juliet 2006-03-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseSo thanks for the (re) review, and the encouragement - I really had a bad day yesterday and I was in such a bad mood (and I'm usually not the constant bad mood kind of person - something always makes me laugh in the end) but I was **. I had to come over here and review again because of what you said: "someone I really, barely know!" That made me laugh, and it's so true for our little relationship here. That's cool about your sister and "mum" (I love how you guys say mum over there, it seems softer then "mom") but anyway I will go and check them out. You're lucky that you have family who (write) or at least "get it" I'm the only one in a long list who puts pen to paper for fun. So, yes, I feel like I had more to say but I don't remember what - I've been at work for ten hours and I've had so much coffee that I'm too wired to do anything else but sit and write on and on right here. I should go though - Love "Gingerbread" part two - the sequel featuring both Jack and Juliet. (Don‘t mind the insanity, it comes in waves!) Much loves,Juliet.
Faithless Juliet 2006-03-22 ch 1,	abuseStick-figures drawn all over your hide I LIKE THE IMAGE OF STICK FIGURES, LIKE TATTOOS, love is easier to swallow if we're cartoons - INTERESTING, I WOULDN‘T EXPECT SOMETHING LIKE THAT TO WORK SO WELL IN THE CONTEXT BUT IT REALLY DOES. Tipping the balance to ride the tide, sugar tastes better from the fingers, no spoon. THE SUGAR AND SPOON PART (VERY SEXY) I LIKE IT WHEN PEOPLE TALK ABOUT THEIR SEXUAL FEELINGS - MAYBE NOT SEX-LIVES OR ACTUAL SEXUAL EXPERIENCES BUT AT LEAST THEIR SEXUAL FEELINGS - I THINK IT’S ONE OF THE MOST NATURAL STATES THAT A PERON CAN BE IN OR DISCUS. (I totally didn‘t realize that I was writing in all caps until just now - forgive, forgive, I‘m so tired.) Musk is the right sound and it fits to explain exactly the way you fill up the air. (I love that man-smell - that smell that men get - you being one, I‘m sure you know what I‘m talking about - love, love, love, but it is more like a musk then a smell.) That bitterness I've come to know and expect, (or respect) I don’t think that you meant it to read like this, but I got a sense of prejudice from this. Like you are a normal person but the way you live isn’t normal to others (that might just be me though - always wanting to take a stand.) Sorry that I could not review this sooner; I’ve had like five hours of sleep in the last 72 hours and my car got towed yesterday and I had this huge blow up with the people who towed it - and I think I ran across the whole length of Seattle at least twice yesterday. Me sleepy! But I have to go to work in an hour and I still have to paint my nails (Hot Pink.) Really enjoyed this, keep up the good work. J.
xHannahx 2006-03-22 ch 1,	abusewoo! gingerness is a good thing. anyways... i like this, its direct and i like it, especially "every bite is edged with that bitterness" though i dont really know why. nicely done. Han.
catral 2006-03-21 ch 1,	abuseWow, thats a pretty cool poem, I enjoyed it much. And like breezy said, beautiful work on the third stanza, easily my favorite.
breezy nostrils 2006-03-21 ch 1,	abuselove is easier to swallow if we'recartoons. beautiful work especially the third stanza.
White Tea and Ginger 2006-03-21 ch 1,	abuseHaha, funny. I didn't see the A/N till I was done, but I was loveloveloving this poem the entire way through. I'd tell you my favorite lines, but I'm afraid I love the entire thing. Favorites!

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