I luv stories with friends who are completely oposite !

Hmm wouldn't micro mini controdict itself ? I mean mini skirts are already short ,so if they were micro that means they would be like non existent , right ? Lol ,sorry couldn't help but think of that .

Lol I love how you use Lolita's name . I read your profile and saw you love japan ,hich therefore means you like japanese culture & trends ( as do I ) so I totaly get Lotlita's name !

Can't wait to get to the real story !

Please R&R my story Frog's ,Warts & Kisses !

Write on .

Confuzzld Me

I'm sorta confused on who the main character is, like who is speaking the whole time in this chappie? Also, I don't like how you have to have every girls reaction, you know, its almost as if your trying even out the characters, but its not working. Other than that I really like it, so please update!

The dialogue is kind of wooden. If they're such friends, wouldn't they know the color of their eyes already without needing to discuss them? I do like the valley girl thing, though. ^_^

And the girls seem just a little Mary-Sue-ish. Pretty and amazing, you know?

AH! FRUITS BASKET! Great, great anime. Only...it's Kyo...not Kyoun, last I checked. Cat boy, I mean.

Let me guess. Kyoun is a cat demon or something of the sort.

I think I've given my share of criticism, right? So, what I like is the writing style. You give good descriptions without being overly wordy.

Well, I'm done!

~IP~

Good start. I wish a little bit more had been explained about the characters, but i liked the clothing descriptions.

PNGz0rs! MY character's name is Neko! ... Did you copy me? ... No, wait, you did this before me. ^^; Ignore the above bit.

-yells- Not updating every Friday! Anywho, I like this story. I think I need more. Update soon!

I like the plot to this a lot, very good.

I like your descriptions. You gave a lot of detail so I think I have a pretty good idea of who the three girls are. Although I have a feeling you'll surprise me.

Serason

interesting characters... i'm interested to read more.

Good description, I can't wait for the plot.