Reviews for Birthday Cake - FictionPress.com

Ahemait 2006-06-09 ch 1,	very different, but i liked it. originality on this site is disappearing (V.V) but at leats they're some people who are orginal. though for saying this, i cant seem to think of a more orginal word than orginal. HA! sorry, anyway, very good poem and thanks for the review!
E.S. Lundgren 2006-03-21 ch 1,	oh i love that, "brithday cake smiles" that's cute, some of the poem is a little choppy due to how you spaced your words, but besides that, this creates a pretty warm feeling.
beinedhiel 2006-03-21 ch 1,	That's really cute! :)
Smoky Bear 2006-03-21 ch 1,	cool simile... prettily written... makes me want cake