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dreamingofyesterday 2008-01-11 . chapter 31
I absolutely love your story "Dakota"!! Also, you acctually know what you are talking about when it comes to things like hay, which is a blessing. It gets annoying when you are reading a story and the setting is in the country and the person writing the story knows nothing about what they are writing about. Update soon. please!!
RexCrimson 2007-09-11 . chapter 31
AH! If the next chapter isn't up soon I might DIE! I am seriously addicted... please update SOON!
Exquisite Enigma 2007-01-09 . chapter 29
Hey! I'm still reading..still love the story...*huggles* Bye!
LeenaAmara 2006-07-16 . chapter 28
Tis good...um...update? PLEASE?
Music Is Me 2006-07-06 . chapter 1
I think your story is really good!I still have to read the rest... I promise I will. Keep up the great work.Please continue.
perdita's kiss 2006-05-13 . chapter 27
**sigh** I hate that boy.
Rhianika 2006-05-13 . chapter 27
Update! Yay! I was wondering what happened to you :( Anyways, awesome chapter as usual. I loved the ending. Does poor Bo have a clue? *thinking* Anyways... who's got a Trans Am? Jordan? I dont remember you mentioning that before. My friend is getting his all original 79 TA soon. Its gonna be rockin' :) I seen Trans Am and I was like OMG! XD

Anywho, so glad to hear you havent dropped the story. I'd be uber disappointed. You must keep writing. I understand that you gotta study though :( Post more soon ;)

Keep writing

~Rhia
perdita's kiss 2006-05-08 . chapter 26
no! not again! rawr, ok, update update!
Just Another Smile 2006-04-28 . chapter 26
Ooh! I liked it, =] Bo can't start warming up though ;) lol.
Rhianika 2006-04-27 . chapter 26
Lmao, can you imagine Dakota's reaction if Bo would have told him some random fact like that when he first got there? Little city boy woulda died from being grossed out. Haha... Anywho, nicely done, as usual :) The keys being left in the ignition part reminded me of when a friend of mine left his keys in his car all day at school because he normally does that at home. At the end of the day he freaked out because he thought he lost his keys and then went out to his car and found them XD Im still amazed no one took it for a joy ride, but then again, I used to live in the city :P

Great job, even if its just killing time. Keep posting! I miss it when you dont post :(

Keep writing

~Rhia
SkateForLife 2006-04-27 . chapter 26
Haha I love this story so far. Keep up the good work!
butterfly-writer1 2006-04-21 . chapter 1
Wow, great story. I enjoy reading it a lot.
Just Another Smile 2006-04-21 . chapter 25
Haha! Interesting to read, lol, you go Bo! xP And poor Dakota... hahaha! Keep it going! =D
marti10 2006-04-20 . chapter 1
I like it, but I want to know more about Dakota. She sounds interesting though, and I like this piece of writing.

Could you please read and review my story? It's called: Famous. it's about an A-lister. It's really cool, and it's just getting juicy.

I will keep on reading your story, and I find it really interesting.
Takenoko 2006-04-20 . chapter 25
o!! A little bit of a cliff hanger. It was neat to hear more about Dakota's life, from the conversation with his city friends. And its cute how you have him all wrapped up in denial...hehehe. I do wonder if anything he says will change Bo's mind at all...hmm. I can't wait to see how this turns out! And this chapter wasn't lame ;) Hope you update soon, but no rush!
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