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| Jeff 2006-03-30 ch 1,  | I like the fact that victoria has a secret. Pretty very witty. I can safely conclude that the other reviewers didn't read the genre. It's a parody, my friends. This was funny, it made me laugh pretty hard, so keep up the great work. |
| swgirl1000 2006-03-22 ch 1,  | Yes I must agree with your other reviewer. The Authour notes, really are not necessary are they? I mean it attracts attention and it takes us away from whaqt looks like a good manga with a lot of prgress in it. But please, little less on the authours more on the good plot line. Keep up the good working! |
| An Inside Joke 2006-03-21 ch 1, | I know you're probably trying to get some sort of comedic feel with your author's notes, but they break up the flow and serve to make the story less funny rather than more funny. |