aw, i love the style! and the title... Grandmother's Rose Garden... it sounds so enchating... and its really well written but... ^_^; it gets pessimistic (sp?? i cant spell) but i can't say anything bad about it because it doesn't really have any flaws... it's just depressing ^_^; haha but... thats the kind of feeling it's supposed to have, right? about the forgotten rose... so it gets the feeling across very well, and its not that long! its great how it can be so effective even though it's short ^_~ well done!

That is a fantastic metaphor. Great job. I love this.

Great Message.

This is so unique and wonderful! I really liked how it flowed. Plus it was interesting. Keep it up.