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| Brazilian'Wonderer. 2008-07-15 ch 6,   | Awesome! Please continue, this is the best bi or gay story ever since it isnt like too pervy lol. The stoy is awesome anyways xD CONTINUE D; |
| Cosmical Sage 2008-04-27 ch 5, | Oh. Mah. Gawd. You MUST write more! I absolutely love it! Really, I do! I want to read soo much more! *Spasm* I want to know what more goes on! I have to know! You have to tell me! But yes, on a less spastic note, I really like how realistic they are with their goofiness. It doesnt seem like they're being fake-goofy. I could see myself going through a few of those same situations with my friends--especially the arcade/DDR scene. You've got to write more! |
| The Intelligent Designer 2007-03-20 ch 5, | It's really good! My only problem is that I'm too stupid to keep track of all the characters...not your fault at all. |
| Zo Lyon 2007-02-10 ch 1, | Well written, I love gay stroies, The guys are so loveable. |
| The Intelligent Designer 2007-02-06 ch 4, | You're awesome! I love it so much. This is very well written, and I'm excited for more! Keep it coming! |
| Limited Edition 2007-01-28 ch 1, | =_= I've been playing all day too. Very exciting start haha yeah, I like how it throws one into the story. I'm a description freak though; I would've liked to see more in this. |
| no.holding.back.the.crooked 2006-12-05 ch 3, | Aw. This is sorta cute. Liked the beginning and the rest of it. I like this chapter a lot XD |
| Zahra 2006-03-31 ch 1, | A good beginning, and being that I'm a fan of shonen-ai helps as well XD I spotted a few mistakes in spelling, but nothing major, otherwise. This is just the prologue, so I'd love to see how this would go. Good luck! |