|Reviews for tenderness|
| ThisCut-UpAngel 5/17/06 . chapter 1
So chaotic, but I must say that I love it. I hope you continue to writing.
| greyskyeyes 4/10/06 . chapter 1
whoa-ho. very crazy, very you. love the new penname btw. good stuff, man.
| St. Mock the Turtle 3/25/06 . chapter 1
I like it. It reminds me a little of stuff by e.e. cumings.
| Moondog Dozier 3/23/06 . chapter 1
The rush of this is marvelous. It gets into the readers head and continues from there. It really has a slick jumping through the movement feel to it. Like accelerated snapshots. Well done.
| run rabbit run 3/21/06 . chapter 1
ifn it isn't exactly how most relationships seem to be and the style and format drives that point like a spike through the heart. very awesome!cheers!-rabbit