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dancingintherain
2006-04-10
ch 1,
i swear i thought i reviewed this poem?? dunno i guess lol but i really liked the effect of the subtle rhyming of the couplets, and the alliteration of 'pixel perfect'. figurative language makese the word go round hehe but newayz imagery once again fabulous and the lines in the parathenesis so cute- i love how you describe the angst and drama as hollywood in the making very creative! keep writing!
i heart that guy
2006-04-09
ch 1,
i love the last stanza, "but through all this hollywood in the making he starts to fade." that's how it feels for me right now..how it's felt so many times before. beautiful.

-i heart that guy
hear me smile
2006-04-03
ch 1,
That is so well put. Well done. You're going on my favorite authors list right after I write this.

Oh, and thanks for the reveiw! I appreciate it.
degenerate elite rabbit
2006-03-28
ch 1,
again, i applaud you. great great stuff.-rabbit
sunday night sky
2006-03-28
ch 1,
sorry i havent reviewed ur stuff of late! i really like this, especially the references to modern culture 'pixel perfect' 'virtual tongue' great piece!
Ajna
2006-03-26
ch 1,
Great poem, it's how I feel at the moment. I love the first stanza the most. Well done. :)
Kartoffel on Canvas
2006-03-25
ch 1,
haha that is a disney channel movie...youre right.
Disturbing Enigma
2006-03-24
ch 1,
Awesome.
catseyeview
2006-03-23
ch 1,
I love how you fill in the title here...nicely done
ronshaberry
2006-03-23
ch 1,
Isn't Pixel Perfect that Disney channel movie? Hm...
in theory
2006-03-23
ch 1,
Delicate, "dainty" and totally brutal underneath. Fascinating, to sum up.
Midnight Star Lights
2006-03-22
ch 1,
I love it! Great Job!

~xoxo~
bright horizon splash
2006-03-21
ch 1,
very sweet and slightly tragic. nice job. ~*
Moondog Dozier
2006-03-21
ch 1,
I like the last stanza. Well written and heartfelt. Good write.
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