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| dancingintherain 2006-04-10 ch 1,   | i swear i thought i reviewed this poem?? dunno i guess lol but i really liked the effect of the subtle rhyming of the couplets, and the alliteration of 'pixel perfect'. figurative language makese the word go round hehe but newayz imagery once again fabulous and the lines in the parathenesis so cute- i love how you describe the angst and drama as hollywood in the making very creative! keep writing! |
| i heart that guy 2006-04-09 ch 1, | i love the last stanza, "but through all this hollywood in the making he starts to fade." that's how it feels for me right now..how it's felt so many times before. beautiful. -i heart that guy |
| hear me smile 2006-04-03 ch 1, | That is so well put. Well done. You're going on my favorite authors list right after I write this. Oh, and thanks for the reveiw! I appreciate it. |
| degenerate elite rabbit 2006-03-28 ch 1, | again, i applaud you. great great stuff.-rabbit |
| sunday night sky 2006-03-28 ch 1, | sorry i havent reviewed ur stuff of late! i really like this, especially the references to modern culture 'pixel perfect' 'virtual tongue' great piece! |
| Ajna 2006-03-26 ch 1, | Great poem, it's how I feel at the moment. I love the first stanza the most. Well done. :) |
| Kartoffel on Canvas 2006-03-25 ch 1, | haha that is a disney channel movie...youre right. |
| Disturbing Enigma 2006-03-24 ch 1, | Awesome. |
| catseyeview 2006-03-23 ch 1, | I love how you fill in the title here...nicely done |
| ronshaberry 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Isn't Pixel Perfect that Disney channel movie? Hm... |
| in theory 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Delicate, "dainty" and totally brutal underneath. Fascinating, to sum up. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-03-22 ch 1, | I love it! Great Job! ~xoxo~ |
| bright horizon splash 2006-03-21 ch 1, | very sweet and slightly tragic. nice job. ~* |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-03-21 ch 1, | I like the last stanza. Well written and heartfelt. Good write. |