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| from beneath the bell jar 2007-01-30 ch 1,   | how lovely. /wonderful/ imagery : candlelit staircases, and well...the whole damn thing - just lovely. |
| red daisy 2006-04-10 ch 1, | what happened to the 'men are devils' thing?? you leavin me? what about the cave?? just kidding!! i think this is mucho goodo!! luv ya THE red daisy |
| hear me smile 2006-04-06 ch 1, | What it's like to be in love in a nutshell. I love this! |
| checkerboxed 2006-03-24 ch 1, | ooh. That takes the breath out of you for a moment... the wording is so light and the words themselves hold so much meaning that it all wraps up into one REALLY great poem. I love it.-O's Rhia |
| ode to a firefly 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Oh wow, you know, I just love that phrase "indigo girl in love." I think I might have to use that in a poem...oh wait. I already did! =P It's so funny how we can take the same phrase and make two entirely different poems out of it, like we did that one time with "bring my wings" (which I still haven't finished yet). Lovely job, m'dear. ~Christine~ |
| Aquafied 2006-03-22 ch 1, | just an idigo girl-i always think, the color indigo vs. style. but is it a style, all these new-fangled kid stufts like. like |
| chaos called creation 2006-03-22 ch 1, | gorgeous images in this. reminds me of midnight escapades |
| Johana 2006-03-22 ch 1, | Very lovely. I like your use of colourful words. Good job. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-03-22 ch 1, | this is really awesome. i really like this one from you. i dont know... its all... light hearted. =) |
| crazy dog events 2006-03-21 ch 1, | Very pretty, though I'm not sure I see the significance in putting the last two words in parentheses. Still, very nice. -pictographic.love |