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| inSINcere-x 2006-03-22 ch 1,   | Wow this was really engrossing, I just gopt lost in it. It could have been because there was opera music playing in the background and I'm a little dizzy from my run, but I'm pretty sure it was just from the poem.Great work Kali you're so talented. No wonder you're my friend. =p Peace Out p.s I favourited it =) |
| cornered.sensations 2006-03-22 ch 1, | very nice imagery here, 'but you carefully un-pick me with your razor', that line really fascinated me, strong diction. Great work |