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Reviews For: Innocence

cornered.sensations
2006-03-22
ch 1,
so sweet, very pretty imagery, I think this is one of my favourites from you so far though i haven't read them all. Great work
Vivian Rose Pierce
2006-03-22
ch 1,
Oh lovely. I like this a lot, especially the line "what use is a kiss without a KISS". Lovely.
Moosher
2006-03-22
ch 1,
Great writing. I liked the line "What use is a kiss without a kiss" Keep up the good work, and congrats on your 50 piece.. that's an accomplishment. Write on!

--Meme
Embellished Heart
2006-03-22
ch 1,
Sweet
crazy dog events
2006-03-22
ch 1,
Beautiful imagery, and altogether just a well-written piece.

Congrats, by the way.

-pictographic.love
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