Reviews for The Best Two Months Of Our Lives

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luv me like no other 2006-09-11 ch 24,	abuseTear...the story ended, and it was a beautiful ending. I like the way that Jo was rejected in the end, but I think she will understand. Sigh. Such a nice story. Hehehe. Jo will continue on to have much more fun in Asia and Europe, i'm sure of it.
Orion Demasecus 2006-09-11 ch 24,	abuseThe ending was good but sad. Who knows, maybe it leaves room for a possible sequal? Like meeting up after university? Or maybe that's just me hoping for a happy ending. As for you being in university, guess what I am too. It's so much fun living in Res what with all the parties and stuff but the classes are tough and painful already. I mean i missed my first lab because i couldn't find the room and when i did find it i found out that i needed a lab manual to get in (which i didn't have btw). Anyways I hope you still find time to write and I will try to find time to write as well. I am extremely busy with school and stuff though, plus i'm having a bit of a writer's block (or whatever it's called). Anyways happy writing (and reading). ~Orion Demasecus
XxstarrlightxX 2006-09-11 ch 24,	abuseYes, I do! It's awesome! You've done a great job on it~
Gabrielle Wing 2006-09-10 ch 24,	abuseI take back what I said earlier. You can finish this with one last chapter. And this was done just...perfectly (well, almost, coz nothing's perfect but this comes close). But yeah, I like the way you ended this with them not being together because...well, um, I just prefer - MUCH prefer - unusual/uncommon endings. So yeah, I enjoyed this very much. Great work, SB! (You change your name a lot lol) Hmm, I wonder what makes people usually think I live somewhere in US or something. Though it could be because FP's mostly dominated by those of the English-speaking world. Never mind that. Could be my own fault. But yeah. It's a tiny little Asian country that you probably wouldn't know...Malaysia? 'Where's that?' you'll say. Haha
Lightning Storm 2006-09-10 ch 24,	abuseExcelent ending. I couldn't of thought of anything better myself. This how story was amazing and so much fun to read. I hope you write more stuff soon. Your material is so unique and different from other things on this site. Its amazing shit, and I can't wait to see more of it. Have fun in university
lch867 2006-09-10 ch 24,	abuseWow, the end. That was a great story, and I guess that was the best possible ending. Keep writing.
luv me like no other 2006-09-04 ch 23,	abuseNice chapter. I feel so bad for him. Jo really fucked him over, but i don't think he should be so angry about it. I feel bad for Jo too. She is kinda kinky and weird though. I hope they meet each other again before they leave for college.
Orion Demasecus 2006-08-31 ch 23,	abusei hate to say this since i love you and everything that you write but this chapter felt like a filler chapter to me. It was kind of bland and for me served only to show that Derek was still mad at Jo and thinking about her, but also over Ellen. It seems like you wanted to make the story 24 chapters long just because it sounded cooler than 23 (the whole 24 hours in a day perhaps). However, to look at this chapter from a positive perspective it did give me something to read. Also this means that there are 3 less things to cover in you well-anticipated final chapter of my favorite story on fictionpress and possibly even ever (yeah i've only read a handful or two of books...most were for school). So basically this chapter wasn't anything special but i've read far worse. This just means that you'll have to work really hard to make sure that the final chapter is the most kickass of all. ~The one and only Orion Demasecus
Lightning Storm 2006-08-30 ch 23,	abuseI loved that bit with Derek and his friends, Ha Ha Depressed Kid. Its just like something me and my friends would pull. Dereks over Ellen now, YAY! I bet she wants a little of Derek's hot bod now that her man is gone and left her. Shit! I just realized the last chapter is coming up :( I don't want it to end. Update soon though. I wanna know how it all ends.
Lightning Storm 2006-08-30 ch 22,	abuseWhat goes up must come down I guess. This chapter was amazing. Little pink boxes are evil. Jo is a crafty little wench, but I love her to death.
notcoolenuff2bme 2006-08-30 ch 23,	abuseGreat chapter, as always. Can't wait for more!
lch867 2006-08-30 ch 23,	abuseGreat Update. Very interesting. So does the story end when he goes off to college?
Gabrielle Wing 2006-08-30 ch 23,	abuseOh, so now you hate vampires? Well! Lol. Aw, only one more chapter to go? It's been good so far. You better make the last one real long. I just feel it's weird that this fic will be done in just one last chapter. Seems to me like there could be a slight more to it. But hey, your fic, let's see how you do it. You've done really great before. Prove: I'm still up this late past midnight because you updated. Then again, I practically live on the other end of the world, so it's a better time there. But yeah, this chapter was good too, with Ellen and the fun with his friends. Depressed kid...haha.
XxstarrlightxX 2006-08-30 ch 23,	abusegreat chapps till now =] keep it up!
luv me like no other 2006-08-26 ch 22,	abuseJo is like no girl I have ever met. She's so funny, and odd. She's so open about her um, ..yeah...lol. I really like this story. It's interesting, and different from the rest on fictionpress. Totally original and not cliche. I can't wait to read the next chapter. !

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