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| suey and liuey 2006-04-14 ch 1,   | i'm still here. for you to talk. or whatever. ps. that brought tears to my eyes. really. |
| aarlove 2006-03-22 ch 1, | Painful. But brilliant! I need more. |
| jerm-the-germ 2006-03-22 ch 1, | so is it "trying to be emotional" or "Definitly emotional" then? and if you read my profile it says that "i write, albeit infrequently, tomes of incoherrent gibberish. it does nothing but carthasis.and i feel much happier". I.E, i didn't write this for your reading satisfaction or to make it less 'mixed up and confusing to read' for you. bah i can't believe i posted this ** here for redundant ignorant fools to read in 5 seconds and pass judgement. **. i'm too emotional now. verbose too. |
| LulaR 2006-03-22 ch 1, | Very disjointed.Not sure whether that adds to it or not. I think the viewpoint is trying to be quite emotional and vague but it just ended up being quite mixed up and confusing to read. Definitly emotional though. |