lol i liked that part with the stupid goblins...this is a great storykeep it going!

great so far. for some reason chpts 4 and 5 are the same. Are you going to continue this because if not I will hurt you. (joking but still finsih)

bobby your story is the suckomgzers why dont u name a characterroachand make him actually koolfoo

Wow, pretty good ^_^ Pryce is a hilarious character.

I want to see more of this! O_O