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| Ruby Mae 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseWoah... |
| Jonayla Plaid 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, sinister, I like it. It really hope you continue on with this story, it kind of gives me chills. You write I'll review. ~-Jonie |
| Jezsh 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! I like its flow from present to past to present/future again. The language is lovely, dramatic and passionate. Great piece. |
| degenerate elite rabbit 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abusedamn. that was good! hard and perversely beautiful. excellent-rabbit |