Reviews for In times of war - FictionPress.com

Kirsten Nussey 2006-05-05 ch 1,	Interesting story, I want to read more. The only critisism that I would have is that you don't have enough paragraphs which makes it harder to read and that you sometimes assume that the reader knows what you're talking about and don't explain fully. On the whole, however, it's a great introduction and has a good use of language.
firestar267 2006-05-02 ch 2,	oh i like, great descriptions and story line, keep it up!