Simply beautiful. I think that seperating the last line from the rest of the poem was a brilliant idea, it just plays out so much better this way.

Beautiful and scary and perfect, I love this piece. You did such a good way capturing the emotions in this poem, and the exact and literal feelings. Gorgeous.

i LOVe the last line. its great.this poem is great. absolutly fantastic.

~Liz

I really like the subject of this piece, quite unique. Very well-written and brimming with emotion.

Well, it has been a while since I've been on this site. Nice poem as always, interesting format. Flow is nice but a bit awkward for me. I like it though.

i see utter worship for this man. the image i got from this was extreme. great job.

I like this.. especially the whole chair thing

Great poem; beautifully written.

I like thais-it really encompasses theout of body experience of hearing yourself read poetry. Cool!